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What does Phillips (1914, Ch. IV) actually say under 'Breaking Up Long Scenes' and 'Preserving the Illusion' (two sub-headings with no section of their own)?

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1914 practice (Phillips): the sub-heading names breaking long scenes and preserving the illusion, but the chapter treats them inside other sections. Breaking a scene with an insert is defended against the persistence-of-vision objection; the close-view is called the best device for dangerously long scenes (no length given); illusion is preserved by making inserts feel natural and by tying close-views to a character's hands. Script notation: scene 'Continued'. Negative result: no length or count limit.

1914 practice (Phillips): the sub-heading names breaking long scenes and preserving the illusion, but the chapter treats them inside other sections. Breaking a scene with an insert is defended against the persistence-of-vision objection; the close-view is called the best device for dangerously long scenes (no length given); illusion is preserved by making inserts feel natural and by tying close-views to a character's hands. Script notation: scene 'Continued'. Negative result: no length or count limit. Curator qualifications: The two sub-headings have no passages of their own (only the L1031 heading list). Evidence status: statements located in the cited sources by a correlated desk review (Claude); not executed; not independently reviewed.
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  • [sourced_fact] 1914 practice (Phillips): the sub-heading names breaking long scenes and preserving the illusion, but the chapter treats them inside other sections. Breaking a scene with an insert is defended against the persistence-of-vision objection; the close-view is called the best device for dangerously long scenes (no length given); illusion is preserved by making inserts feel natural and by tying close-views to a character's hands. Script notation: scene 'Continued'. Negative result: no length or count limit. · locator: candidate evidence excerpts source

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