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Comparison of four period accounts by candidate ID, built from Sargent's pinned chapter and the other accounts' published candidate records (their texts were not re-read; wording is theirs). Fifteen items: agreement in direction on crime as conditional, suggestion over depiction, a...

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Comparison of four period accounts by candidate ID, built from Sargent's pinned chapter and the other accounts' published candidate records (their texts were not re-read; wording is theirs). Fifteen items: agreement in direction on crime as conditional, suggestion over depiction, a young-audience concern, cold blood, avoiding the underworld, and local gates being harsher; differences in the body's name, how its role is described, tone toward it, and the test for acceptable crime; Sargent's unique points are board timing (first print before the cut negative) and the repentant-woman pattern; the 1919 list items (suicide, mischief, lynching, kidnapping) have no counterpart in his chapter. Differences in breadth are differences between authors, not evidence that practice changed.

Comparison of four period accounts by candidate ID, built from Sargent's pinned chapter and the other accounts' published candidate records (their texts were not re-read; wording is theirs). Fifteen items: agreement in direction on crime as conditional, suggestion over depiction, a young-audience concern, cold blood, avoiding the underworld, and local gates being harsher; differences in the body's name, how its role is described, tone toward it, and the test for acceptable crime; Sargent's unique points are board timing (first print before the cut negative) and the repentant-woman pattern; the 1919 list items (suicide, mischief, lynching, kidnapping) have no counterpart in his chapter. Differences in breadth are differences between authors, not evidence that practice changed. Item-by-item comparison (the producer's own fifteen verdicts, verbatim; inference built from Sargent's pinned chapter and the other accounts' published candidate records C3-B256-S71, C3-B242-S65 and C3-B258-S73, whose texts were not re-read; "silence" means silence in the records read; agreement is in direction only): - Item 1, body and name: Sargent calls it the National Board of Review, delegates of civic societies (People's Institute); Phillips and Esenwein and Leeds use the "National Board of Censorship" (C3-B256-S71-03; C3-B242-S65-03); Münsterberg names no board (C3-B258-S73-03). Difference in name and description; silence for Münsterberg. Sargent's book has 0 hits for "National Board of Censorship". - Item 2, force of the board: Sargent says its power comes only from submitting manufacturers and that unpassed films are stopped only through police in many cities; the 1919 account describes the board as inspecting and passing all films before release and refusing what it finds objectionable (C3-B242-S65-03 E1, E2). Possible conflict in emphasis between two trade authors; the records read do not settle it. - Item 3, tag or notice: Sargent says the tag reads "passed", with a history of "approved"; Phillips mentions a Board of Censorship notice at the end of a film (C3-B256-S71-03 E7). Partial agreement that a board notice appears on films; the 1919 and Münsterberg records are silent. - Item 4, young audiences: Sargent (young people), the 1919 account (children and undiscriminating adults, C3-B242-S65-03 E15) and Münsterberg (the young mind may suffer, C3-B258-S73-07 E7) all link the concern to young viewers; Phillips defines a censor by "moral influence" (C3-B256-S71-03 E6). Agreement in direction; Sargent adds a commercial reason (ultra-sensationalism reacting on makers) not in the other records. - Item 5, crime is conditional: Sargent (lesson that crime is punished), the 1919 account (essential to the story and moral-pointing, C3-B242-S65-04 E4, E6) and Münsterberg (moral atmosphere of the whole play, C3-B258-S73-03 E11) all make crime conditional. Agreement in direction; the tests differ (lesson-punishment; essential-not-the-purpose; atmosphere). - Item 6, suggestion versus depiction: Sargent (suggested may pass; cut-away) agrees in direction with Phillips's cut-away example (C3-B256-S71-02 E8) and the 1919 burglary item (show entry, not method, C3-B242-S65-04 E1). Difference on suicide: in the 1919 list even a suggestion is barred (C3-B242-S65-04 E17), while Sargent's chapter does not mention suicide (0 hits). - Item 7, passion versus cold blood: Sargent says a passion crime is more apt to pass; the 1919 list includes shooting in "cold blood" among crime items (C3-B242-S65-03 E6). Agreement in direction on cold blood; the passion distinction is not in the 1919 record read; Phillips and Münsterberg are silent on it in the records read. - Item 8, immorality and vice: Sargent bars lascivious and irreligious themes absolutely and describes a repentant-woman pattern; the 1919 account has "vulgarity and suggestion" (C3-B242-S65-03 E9) and no sex-depiction rule (C3-B242-S65-04); Phillips calls underworld plays immoral (C3-B256-S71-02 E13). Agreement in direction to avoid the lewd; the repentant-woman pattern has no counterpart in the records read. - Item 9, underworld, saloons and fights: Sargent advises avoiding them; Phillips calls underworld plays immoral (his classification, C3-B256-S71-02 E13); the 1919 burglary and weapons items are conditional (C3-B242-S65-04). Agreement in direction for the underworld; the 1919 treatment is more conditional. - Item 10, items only in the 1919 list: Sargent's chapter has 0 hits for suicid*, kidnap*, lynch* and mischief. His "unwritten law" (para 10, advice) has no stated referent; the 1919 list item is the board not recognising the so-called unwritten law as justification for killing (C3-B242-S65-03 E5). No match is claimed. Silence on the other items. - Item 11, local and police gates: Sargent (local or police censorships in some cities, less qualified) and the 1919 account (local boards carry the idea to extremes; police in many cities, C3-B242-S65-06 E3, E4) agree in direction that local gates exist and can be harsher. Phillips mentions local boards only in the glossary (C3-B256-S71-03 E6); Münsterberg reports producers' doubts about Federal censorship (C3-B258-S73-03 E4), which Sargent's chapter does not mention (0 hits for federal). - Item 12, writer advice and the director: Sargent warns that a director may carry an incident across the border and tells outside authors to write so safe that allowance does not arise; the 1919 account advises not giving the director the opportunity to adopt objectionable features (C3-B242-S65-04 E9). Close agreement. Münsterberg rejects the dramatized sermon (C3-B258-S73-03 E9), a different kind of claim (treatment, not safety). - Item 13, the moral: Sargent (a good moral is needed, not just claimed; lesson that crime is punished), Phillips (a moral ending is a must, C3-B256-S71-04 E1), the 1919 account (the incident must point a moral, C3-B242-S65-04 E6) and Münsterberg (appended punishment is not enough, C3-B258-S73-03 E5) all touch it. Agreement that a moral matters; they differ on whether late punishment suffices. - Item 14, tone toward the board: Sargent defends the national board (high ideals, passes much it does not approve of) and criticises local rulings; Phillips criticises the board's composition and hopes for a broader view (C3-B256-S71-03 E2, E4); the 1919 account criticises local boards (C3-B242-S65-06 E13). Difference between Sargent and Phillips; these are authors' attitudes, not facts about the board. - Item 15, timing of the ruling: only Sargent says the board rules on the first print before the cut negative goes to the printing room; the records read for the other three accounts do not state a timing for the national board (silence). The 1919 record does describe local cuts in a city (C3-B242-S65-06 E5), consistent with local action after release but not stated as timing. Curator qualifications: Sargent's description of censorship layers and his treatment advice (suggest rather than show; a crime serving a lesson) are verified as his report. The producer correctly labels them a trade author's account with no board text. Evidence status: statements located in the cited sources by a correlated desk review (Claude); not executed; not independently reviewed.
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  • [sourced_fact] Comparison of four period accounts by candidate ID, built from Sargent's pinned chapter and the other accounts' published candidate records (their texts were not re-read; wording is theirs). Fifteen items: agreement in direction on crime as conditional, suggestion over depiction, a young-audience concern, cold blood, avoiding the underworld, and local gates being harsher; differences in the body's name, how its role is described, tone toward it, and the test for acceptable crime; Sargent's unique points are board timing (first print before the cut negative) and the repentant-woman pattern; the 1919 list items (suicide, mischief, lynching, kidnapping) have no counterpart in his chapter. Differences in breadth are differences between authors, not evidence that practice changed. · locator: sar.flat (a3cff7eb) ch. LXVII offsets per candidate source

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