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What may a cast-list entry say about a character's appearance and manner, and how does Sargent (1916) tell the writer to choose and use names?

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Sargent (Ch. XXIX paras 6-16) says a cast entry should not describe looks unless a physical trait matters to the plot: a limp is listed because a disguise depends on it, not for colour. Permanent mannerisms go in the cast; temporary ones and disguises go in the scenes. Keep one name for each character throughout. Choose short, pleasant names for heroines, a harsh sound for antagonists, tag minor characters by role (Butler, Detective) rather than by name, and avoid fanciful or punning names. He also reports a Thanhouser convention of fixed names for stock types. The Brown, Agatha and Betty entries are his illustrations.

Sargent (Ch. XXIX paras 6-16) says a cast entry should not describe looks unless a physical trait matters to the plot: a limp is listed because a disguise depends on it, not for colour. Permanent mannerisms go in the cast; temporary ones and disguises go in the scenes. Keep one name for each character throughout. Choose short, pleasant names for heroines, a harsh sound for antagonists, tag minor characters by role (Butler, Detective) rather than by name, and avoid fanciful or punning names. He also reports a Thanhouser convention of fixed names for stock types. The Brown, Agatha and Betty entries are his illustrations. Curator qualifications: Cast description and naming advice verified; stock-name convention is reported from one studio writer. Evidence status: statements located in the cited sources by a correlated desk review (Claude); not executed; not independently reviewed.
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  • [sourced_fact] Sargent (Ch. XXIX paras 6-16) says a cast entry should not describe looks unless a physical trait matters to the plot: a limp is listed because a disguise depends on it, not for colour. Permanent mannerisms go in the cast; temporary ones and disguises go in the scenes. Keep one name for each character throughout. Choose short, pleasant names for heroines, a harsh sound for antagonists, tag minor characters by role (Butler, Detective) rather than by name, and avoid fanciful or punning names. He also reports a Thanhouser convention of fixed names for stock types. The Brown, Agatha and Betty entries are his illustrations. · locator: sar.flat (a3cff7eb) offsets per candidate; sar.flat regex spot checks source

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