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How does Butcher's outline-first and episode-relevance advice in XVII compare, by candidate ID only, with Baker's 1919 scenario and with Screen Australia/BFI development documents?

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Comparison made only through the candidates' own summaries (C3-B194-S47-01..03, C3-B220-S53-04 and -06, C3-B224-S56-03/-04; the underlying sources were not re-read and C3-B001-S1-04 is not repeated). Shared ground: all treat a short document or sketch made before the full work as the place to find structural problems (S47-02, S53-04 per their summaries). Differences: XVII gives no document types, page lengths, reader questions or revision order; Baker's scenario (per S47-01/-02) has a persons list, settings, action, flexible revision; Screen Australia's outline and scene breakdown (per S53-04) check scene order, repetition, dead ends, superfluous scenes, which is close to XVII's 'relevant to the action' rule. BFI (per S56-03) sits the treatment as the first funded stage. These parallels are this batch's reading of summaries, not claims of influence.

Comparison made only through the candidates' own summaries (C3-B194-S47-01..03, C3-B220-S53-04 and -06, C3-B224-S56-03/-04; the underlying sources were not re-read and C3-B001-S1-04 is not repeated). Shared ground: all treat a short document or sketch made before the full work as the place to find structural problems (S47-02, S53-04 per their summaries). Differences: XVII gives no document types, page lengths, reader questions or revision order; Baker's scenario (per S47-01/-02) has a persons list, settings, action, flexible revision; Screen Australia's outline and scene breakdown (per S53-04) check scene order, repetition, dead ends, superfluous scenes, which is close to XVII's 'relevant to the action' rule. BFI (per S56-03) sits the treatment as the first funded stage. These parallels are this batch's reading of summaries, not claims of influence. Curator qualifications: Comparison by other batches' summaries. Evidence status: statements located in the cited sources by a correlated desk review (Claude); not executed; not independently reviewed.
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  • [sourced_fact] Comparison made only through the candidates' own summaries (C3-B194-S47-01..03, C3-B220-S53-04 and -06, C3-B224-S56-03/-04; the underlying sources were not re-read and C3-B001-S1-04 is not repeated). Shared ground: all treat a short document or sketch made before the full work as the place to find structural problems (S47-02, S53-04 per their summaries). Differences: XVII gives no document types, page lengths, reader questions or revision order; Baker's scenario (per S47-01/-02) has a persons list, settings, action, flexible revision; Screen Australia's outline and scene breakdown (per S53-04) check scene order, repetition, dead ends, superfluous scenes, which is close to XVII's 'relevant to the action' rule. BFI (per S56-03) sits the treatment as the first funded stage. These parallels are this batch's reading of summaries, not claims of influence. · locator: candidate evidence excerpts source

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