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How does the strength of the set-up before a surprising final event change how surprising readers rate it, and how can that be pre-tested?

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Grimes-Maguire & Keane (CogSci proceedings, repository copy) varied only the second sentence of five-sentence everyday scenarios and found that the same final event was rated less surprising the more specifically the set-up named its enabling condition (means 2.8, 3.8, 4.4 on a 1-7 scale), with faster reading of the final sentence only for the most predictable version. A second experiment found that undoing an enabling condition gave the highest surprise but little more than a vague hint. This is measured evidence that set-up strength and surprise trade off for short everyday scenarios; it does not measure fairness, hindsight or satisfaction, and the stimuli are not twist endings.

Grimes-Maguire & Keane (CogSci proceedings, repository copy) varied only the second sentence of five-sentence everyday scenarios and found that the same final event was rated less surprising the more specifically the set-up named its enabling condition (means 2.8, 3.8, 4.4 on a 1-7 scale), with faster reading of the final sentence only for the most predictable version. A second experiment found that undoing an enabling condition gave the highest surprise but little more than a vague hint. This is measured evidence that set-up strength and surprise trade off for short everyday scenarios; it does not measure fairness, hindsight or satisfaction, and the stimuli are not twist endings. Curator qualifications: Verified with the lead's locator (FB46-4): means 2.806 / 3.819 / 4.444 (the curator's earlier search used rounded values). The by-materials non-significance caveat is kept from the candidate. Resolves the C3R-0297 hold. Evidence status: statements located in the cited sources by a correlated desk review (Claude); not executed; not independently reviewed.
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  • [sourced_fact] Grimes-Maguire & Keane (CogSci proceedings, repository copy) varied only the second sentence of five-sentence everyday scenarios and found that the same final event was rated less surprising the more specifically the set-up named its enabling condition (means 2.8, 3.8, 4.4 on a 1-7 scale), with faster reading of the final sentence only for the most predictable version. A second experiment found that undoing an enabling condition gave the highest surprise but little more than a vague hint. This is measured evidence that set-up strength and surprise trade off for short everyday scenarios; it does not measure fairness, hindsight or satisfaction, and the stimuli are not twist endings. · locator: lines 141, 154-155 source

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