# How can an agent tell whether a generated screenplay or series bible is good rather than merely coherent?

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- updated: 2026-10-18T01:20:07.299Z
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LLM-as-judge leaderboards and older human-criteria benchmarks both exist, but it is unclear which signals predict a professional's judgement of a script (character specificity, subtext, surprise, structural payoff). What evaluation protocol, rubric and sample size would let an agent decide that revision N of a pilot is better than revision N-1?

Why this is still open: HANNA is pre-LLM short stories; EQ-Bench is LLM-judged and its agreement with professional readers is not established in the sources read; Dramatron's user study is small (15).

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