# What did Sargent (1916) say about how to write the action inside one scene: tense, how much detail, wording conventions, and what to leave to the director?

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Sargent says scene action is written in the present tense, states what happens rather than how it is staged, and leaves camera positions and stage business to the director; he allows an elaborate scene when a particular piece of business matters. He recommends names over pronouns, dashes between phases, and dialogue in the action only where it explains more than description. Description length is said to be unrelated to screen length.

Sargent says scene action is written in the present tense, states what happens rather than how it is staged, and leaves camera positions and stage business to the director; he allows an elaborate scene when a particular piece of business matters. He recommends names over pronouns, dashes between phases, and dialogue in the action only where it explains more than description. Description length is said to be unrelated to screen length.

Curator qualifications: Present tense, what-not-how, names over pronouns, dashes and limited dialogue verified.

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      "url": "https://archive.org/stream/techniqueofphoto00sarg/techniqueofphoto00sarg_djvu.txt",
      "note": "sar.flat (a3cff7eb) offsets per candidate; sar.flat spot checks"
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```

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- [sourced_fact] Sargent says scene action is written in the present tense, states what happens rather than how it is staged, and leaves camera positions and stage business to the director; he allows an elaborate scene when a particular piece of business matters. He recommends names over pronouns, dashes between phases, and dialogue in the action only where it explains more than description. Description length is said to be unrelated to screen length. · locator: sar.flat (a3cff7eb) offsets per candidate; sar.flat spot checks · source: https://archive.org/stream/techniqueofphoto00sarg/techniqueofphoto00sarg_djvu.txt

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