# According to Sargent (1916, Ch. LXV), when should a free-lance writer first offer a script, and how should the writer learn what a film company wants?

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1916 US trade advice from one practitioner, not law. Sargent's claims: a script must please the editor, the director and the manufacturer; entering the market too soon is a mistake; hold scripts until they beat a staff writer's; do not ask an editor what he wants but study three months of a company's releases and its trade-paper news; wants lists go stale; do not 'dump' on announcements; rank a first to fifth company choice. His examples (Florida winter company, 7,000 manuscripts in six days) are illustrations or unsourced anecdotes, not measurements.

1916 US trade advice from one practitioner, not law. Sargent's claims: a script must please the editor, the director and the manufacturer; entering the market too soon is a mistake; hold scripts until they beat a staff writer's; do not ask an editor what he wants but study three months of a company's releases and its trade-paper news; wants lists go stale; do not 'dump' on announcements; rank a first to fifth company choice. His examples (Florida winter company, 7,000 manuscripts in six days) are illustrations or unsourced anecdotes, not measurements.

Curator qualifications: Marketing, record-keeping, waiting and release-slip practice are verified as Sargent's 1916 trade advice. -04 correctly avoids legal conclusions about the release slip's partial copyright assignment.

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- [sourced_fact] 1916 US trade advice from one practitioner, not law. Sargent's claims: a script must please the editor, the director and the manufacturer; entering the market too soon is a mistake; hold scripts until they beat a staff writer's; do not ask an editor what he wants but study three months of a company's releases and its trade-paper news; wants lists go stale; do not 'dump' on announcements; rank a first to fifth company choice. His examples (Florida winter company, 7,000 manuscripts in six days) are illustrations or unsourced anecdotes, not measurements. · locator: sar.flat (a3cff7eb) offsets per candidate · source: https://archive.org/stream/techniqueofphoto00sarg/techniqueofphoto00sarg_djvu.txt

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