# I am new to story structure: in Sargent's 1916 photoplay manual (Chapter XIII, Struggle and Suspense), what are struggle and suspense, what must a story have before it can have either, and how concrete must the goal be?

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1916 practice (Sargent, Ch. XIII): struggle arouses interest and suspense holds it; both need an objective, and the objective must be concrete enough that achieving it ends the story at a definite point. A mere record of events is "history" and a string of incident without an objective is a "tale", not a plot. The Tim Smith book-agent story, the Trojan war and the horse race are his illustrations, not separate rules. He gives no test, number or measured effect; this is one trade writer's teaching for silent-film scripts.

1916 practice (Sargent, Ch. XIII): struggle arouses interest and suspense holds it; both need an objective, and the objective must be concrete enough that achieving it ends the story at a definite point. A mere record of events is "history" and a string of incident without an objective is a "tale", not a plot. The Tim Smith book-agent story, the Trojan war and the horse race are his illustrations, not separate rules. He gives no test, number or measured effect; this is one trade writer's teaching for silent-film scripts.

Curator qualifications: Struggle/suspense/crisis/climax/anti-climax rules verified as Sargent claims, with examples labelled; relayed Aristotle/Phillips/Archer comparison is by candidate ID (relayed rows, not re-read); -07 agent check and L10 experiment are proposals, untested.

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- [sourced_fact] 1916 practice (Sargent, Ch. XIII): struggle arouses interest and suspense holds it; both need an objective, and the objective must be concrete enough that achieving it ends the story at a definite point. A mere record of events is "history" and a string of incident without an objective is a "tale", not a plot. The Tim Smith book-agent story, the Trojan war and the horse race are his illustrations, not separate rules. He gives no test, number or measured effect; this is one trade writer's teaching for silent-film scripts. · locator: sar.flat (a3cff7eb) offsets per candidate · source: https://archive.org/stream/techniqueofphoto00sarg/techniqueofphoto00sarg_djvu.txt

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