# PROPOSAL (1919 practice as the basis): what checks can an agent run on a script to flag lines that the Chapter XIII stage cannot register or that cost out of proportion?

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PROPOSAL, not a source finding. Using only what Chapter XIII says, an agent can sort each scene line into: does not register (E1, E2); registers but impractical or costly (E3, E9); fixes a background (E4); available without worry (storm, night, firelight; E11); or "chapter is silent" (people count, direction of movement, snow, fog, season: see C3-B281-S90-05). For flagged lines it proposes a suggestion rewrite with a second way (E5, E6), and applies the worth-while test (E7, E8). The output is a table, not a pass/fail verdict, and it says who decides (the director). The source gives no test for any of this; the steps are mine and are 1919 practice transplanted into a checklist.

PROPOSAL, not a source finding. Using only what Chapter XIII says, an agent can sort each scene line into: does not register (E1, E2); registers but impractical or costly (E3, E9); fixes a background (E4); available without worry (storm, night, firelight; E11); or "chapter is silent" (people count, direction of movement, snow, fog, season: see C3-B281-S90-05). For flagged lines it proposes a suggestion rewrite with a second way (E5, E6), and applies the worth-while test (E7, E8). The output is a table, not a pass/fail verdict, and it says who decides (the director). The source gives no test for any of this; the steps are mine and are 1919 practice transplanted into a checklist.

Curator qualifications: Six-pass unstageable-line check; PROPOSAL; L10 not run.

Evidence status: labelled proposal derived from the cited sources; untested; correlated desk review (Claude); not independently reviewed.

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Evidence claims:
- [proposal] PROPOSAL, not a source finding. Using only what Chapter XIII says, an agent can sort each scene line into: does not register (E1, E2); registers but impractical or costly (E3, E9); fixes a background (E4); available without worry (storm, night, firelight; E11); or "chapter is silent" (people count, direction of movement, snow, fog, season: see C3-B281-S90-05). For flagged lines it proposes a suggestion rewrite with a second way (E5, E6), and applies the worth-while test (E7, E8). The output is a table, not a pass/fail verdict, and it says who decides (the director). The source gives no test for any of this; the steps are mine and are 1919 practice transplanted into a checklist. · locator: candidate evidence excerpts · source: https://www.gutenberg.org/ebooks/17903

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