# What must a speech do in a scene (give facts, move the action, show character), and how did Baker say to balance them?

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In Chapter VIII Baker ranks the jobs: first, dialogue must state clearly the facts the audience needs; second, it must do so in an order that keeps interest and builds emotion; third, it must be in the speaker's character. His closing summary names three essentials (clearness, onward movement of the story, in character) and treats charm, wit or beauty as a bonus. His balancing rule is qualitative: the best dialogue delivers the facts while seeming to be busy only with characterisation, and the example for that is the Hamlet second quarto and Hindle Wakes. He gives no ratio or measurement.

In Chapter VIII Baker ranks the jobs: first, dialogue must state clearly the facts the audience needs; second, it must do so in an order that keeps interest and builds emotion; third, it must be in the speaker's character. His closing summary names three essentials (clearness, onward movement of the story, in character) and treats charm, wit or beauty as a bonus. His balancing rule is qualitative: the best dialogue delivers the facts while seeming to be busy only with characterisation, and the example for that is the Hamlet second quarto and Hindle Wakes. He gives no ratio or measurement.

Curator qualifications: Three jobs and their order; overlaps S3/S26; increment is whole-chapter locators.

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- [sourced_fact] In Chapter VIII Baker ranks the jobs: first, dialogue must state clearly the facts the audience needs; second, it must do so in an order that keeps interest and builds emotion; third, it must be in the speaker's character. His closing summary names three essentials (clearness, onward movement of the story, in character) and treats charm, wit or beauty as a bonus. His balancing rule is qualitative: the best dialogue delivers the facts while seeming to be busy only with characterisation, and the example for that is the Hamlet second quarto and Hindle Wakes. He gives no ratio or measurement. · locator: candidate evidence excerpts · source: https://www.gutenberg.org/cache/epub/36580/pg36580.txt

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