# What failure modes does Archer name when characters do not drive the action (chance, passivity, unmotivated change of mind), and what scene-level check follows?

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Archer treats action that the characters' wills could have produced, but chance produces instead, as a construction error and a breach of 'the fundamental law' of the craft; he asks that the decisive scene be played between the characters whose interest carries the play (the 'obligatory scene'), and that a change of resolve have a motive other than elapsed time. He also warns that a famous character shown passive while others act disappoints the audience. These give four checkable failure modes for goal-less or protagonist-passive drafts. All derive from a single 1912 manual and its chosen examples.

Archer treats action that the characters' wills could have produced, but chance produces instead, as a construction error and a breach of 'the fundamental law' of the craft; he asks that the decisive scene be played between the characters whose interest carries the play (the 'obligatory scene'), and that a change of resolve have a motive other than elapsed time. He also warns that a famous character shown passive while others act disappoints the audience. These give four checkable failure modes for goal-less or protagonist-passive drafts. All derive from a single 1912 manual and its chosen examples.

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- [sourced_fact] Archer treats action that the characters' wills could have produced, but chance produces instead, as a construction error and a breach of 'the fundamental law' of the craft; he asks that the decisive scene be played between the characters whose interest carries the play (the 'obligatory scene'), and that a change of resolve have a motive other than elapsed time. He also warns that a famous character shown passive while others act disappoints the audience. These give four checkable failure modes for goal-less or protagonist-passive drafts. All derive from a single 1912 manual and its chosen examples. · locator: candidate evidence excerpts · source: https://www.gutenberg.org/cache/epub/10865/pg10865.txt

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