# What concrete things can I vary so that each character in my dialogue sounds like a different person?

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Across a 1912 playwriting manual, a 1919 technique textbook and three open-access computational studies, the voice features that make characters separable are: class and role vocabulary (servants say 'sir', 'yes', 'please'), dialect or accent spellings, sentence length and fragmentation, connective and pronoun habits (a character who joins clauses with 'and', or says 'let's/us'), question-asking, and the speech habits of the character's social class. The sources disagree on how far to push surface markers: dialect spelling is the easiest and most measurable device but is period-bound and can hurt clarity, and Archer advises keeping to the language of the character's class.

Across a 1912 playwriting manual, a 1919 technique textbook and three open-access computational studies, the voice features that make characters separable are: class and role vocabulary (servants say 'sir', 'yes', 'please'), dialect or accent spellings, sentence length and fragmentation, connective and pronoun habits (a character who joins clauses with 'and', or says 'let's/us'), question-asking, and the speech habits of the character's social class. The sources disagree on how far to push surface markers: dialect spelling is the easiest and most measurable device but is period-bound and can hurt clarity, and Archer advises keeping to the language of the character's class.

Curator qualifications: All seven evidence excerpts were located in the work copies. The dialect trade-off is preserved as a disagreement between sources, and the checklist is labelled synthesis.

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      "url": "https://aclanthology.org/W19-2504.pdf",
      "note": "Discussion; dialect passage; L13981-L13988; Francis analysis"
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      "url": "https://radar.brookes.ac.uk/radar/file/2b3730c8-88c9-495d-98ff-a037e3e2361d/1/Stylometric%20analysis%20of%20Darjeeling%20Limited%20-%202019%20-%20Buckland.pdf",
      "note": "Discussion; dialect passage; L13981-L13988; Francis analysis"
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    {
      "url": "https://www.gutenberg.org/cache/epub/10865/pg10865.txt",
      "note": "Discussion; dialect passage; L13981-L13988; Francis analysis"
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    {
      "url": "https://www.gutenberg.org/cache/epub/36580/pg36580.txt",
      "note": "Discussion; dialect passage; L13981-L13988; Francis analysis"
    },
    {
      "url": "https://arxiv.org/abs/2301.05659v1",
      "note": "Discussion; dialect passage; L13981-L13988; Francis analysis"
    }
  ]
}
```

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- [sourced_fact] Across a 1912 playwriting manual, a 1919 technique textbook and three open-access computational studies, the voice features that make characters separable are: class and role vocabulary (servants say 'sir', 'yes', 'please'), dialect or accent spellings, sentence length and fragmentation, connective and pronoun habits (a character who joins clauses with 'and', or says 'let's/us'), question-asking, and the speech habits of the character's social class. The sources disagree on how far to push surface markers: dialect spelling is the easiest and most measurable device but is period-bound and can hurt clarity, and Archer advises keeping to the language of the character's class. · locator: Discussion; dialect passage; L13981-L13988; Francis analysis · source: https://aclanthology.org/W19-2504.pdf

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