# What do designers' first-person accounts (Emily Short, Failbetter) say about how quality-based narrative works and where it strains?

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- updated: 2026-10-23T13:12:51.395Z
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Emily Short describes quality-based narrative (Failbetter's term) as storylets unlocked by numeric qualities for inventory, skills and progress, contrasts it with salience-based selection, and notes from experience that it feels thin until many storylets exist, long option lists overwhelm players, and mid-sized modular additions are safe; Failbetter describes qualities driving branches and 'questicle' chains. Practitioner accounts.

Emily Short describes quality-based narrative (Failbetter's term) as storylets unlocked by numeric qualities for inventory, skills and progress, contrasts it with salience-based selection, and notes from experience that it feels thin until many storylets exist, long option lists overwhelm players, and mid-sized modular additions are safe; Failbetter describes qualities driving branches and 'questicle' chains. Practitioner accounts.

Curator qualifications: Papers, posts and docs read 2026-10-22; no story built.

Limitations: Papers, posts and docs read 2026-10-22; no story built.

Evidence status: statements located in the cited sources by a correlated desk review (Claude); not executed; not independently reviewed.

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  "citations": [
    {
      "url": "https://emshort.blog/2016/04/12/beyond-branching-quality-based-and-salience-based-narrative-structures",
      "note": "Emily Short, Beyond Branching (2016) (live); Failbetter: Echo Bazaar Narrative Structures, part two (live)"
    },
    {
      "url": "https://www.failbettergames.com/news/echo-bazaar-narrative-structures-part-two",
      "note": "Emily Short, Beyond Branching (2016) (live); Failbetter: Echo Bazaar Narrative Structures, part two (live)"
    },
    {
      "url": "https://emshort.blog/2016/04/12/beyond-branching-quality-based-and-salience-based-narrative-structures/",
      "note": "observed URL (dated/alias form of the cited catalogue source; canonical identity retained)"
    }
  ]
}
```

Evidence claims:
- [sourced_fact] Emily Short describes quality-based narrative (Failbetter's term) as storylets unlocked by numeric qualities for inventory, skills and progress, contrasts it with salience-based selection, and notes from experience that it feels thin until many storylets exist, long option lists overwhelm players, and mid-sized modular additions are safe; Failbetter describes qualities driving branches and 'questicle' chains. Practitioner accounts. · locator: Emily Short, Beyond Branching (2016) (live); Failbetter: Echo Bazaar Narrative Structures, part two (live) · source: https://emshort.blog/2016/04/12/beyond-branching-quality-based-and-salience-based-narrative-structures

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