# What do two working screenwriters say about writing dialogue from listening to real speech, with their examples and caveats?

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In Scriptnotes 438, John August and Craig Mazin treat film dialogue as an optimised synthesis of real speech: listen to real talk for patterns, interruptions and listening behaviour, but do not transcribe it verbatim; emotional speakers become less, not more, eloquent; rehearsed and discovering speakers can share a scene. The episode does not discuss subtext by name. Hosts' opinions, unmeasured.

In Scriptnotes 438, John August and Craig Mazin treat film dialogue as an optimised synthesis of real speech: listen to real talk for patterns, interruptions and listening behaviour, but do not transcribe it verbatim; emotional speakers become less, not more, eloquent; rehearsed and discovering speakers can share a scene. The episode does not discuss subtext by name. Hosts' opinions, unmeasured.

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- [sourced_fact] In Scriptnotes 438, John August and Craig Mazin treat film dialogue as an optimised synthesis of real speech: listen to real talk for patterns, interruptions and listening behaviour, but do not transcribe it verbatim; emotional speakers become less, not more, eloquent; rehearsed and discovering speakers can share a scene. The episode does not discuss subtext by name. Hosts' opinions, unmeasured. · locator: johnaugust.com Scriptnotes episode 438 transcript (live) · source: https://johnaugust.com/2020/scriptnotes-episode-438-how-to-listen-transcript

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