# How does a working writer-director describe writing dialogue that carries subtext, with a concrete technique, scene examples and an example where direct speech was kept?

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Dee Rees (BAFTA Screenwriters' Lecture, 2017) advises writing dialogue several steps back from what characters feel (her professor's 'triple bumper': back off three times), building scenes on avoidance, letting action and blocking carry the unspoken, and giving each character a distinct vocabulary; she also kept a direct line the actors fought for and changed the blocking to make it work. One practitioner's account.

Dee Rees (BAFTA Screenwriters' Lecture, 2017) advises writing dialogue several steps back from what characters feel (her professor's 'triple bumper': back off three times), building scenes on avoidance, letting action and blocking carry the unspoken, and giving each character a distinct vocabulary; she also kept a direct line the actors fought for and changed the blocking to make it work. One practitioner's account.

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- [sourced_fact] Dee Rees (BAFTA Screenwriters' Lecture, 2017) advises writing dialogue several steps back from what characters feel (her professor's 'triple bumper': back off three times), building scenes on avoidance, letting action and blocking carry the unspoken, and giving each character a distinct vocabulary; she also kept a direct line the actors fought for and changed the blocking to make it work. One practitioner's account. · locator: BAFTA live page GET (curator readback) · source: https://www.bafta.org/media-centre/press-releases/bafta-screenwriters-lecture-series-dee-rees

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