# PROPOSAL on 1916 practice: which failure modes does Sargent name for motive and plausibility, which are claims and which examples, and what check could an agent run on an outline using only those?

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From Sargent's ch. X, XII and the passages they point to (ch. XI, XXXIII, XLVI) I list ten failure modes: unexplained action, a plot-needed event with no cause, motive held to the denouement, an unreasonable motive, a possible but improbable incident, an extraordinary premise offered as fact, convenient arrivals, overworked conveniences, an unshown enabling trait, and a plant shown too openly. Each is a Sargent claim or a Sargent example, labelled as such. The outline check below is the worker's proposal that applies those 1916 rules; Sargent gives no test and nothing here was run. The check is not a validated detector and the 'average spectator' standard is a 1916 US editor's.

From Sargent's ch. X, XII and the passages they point to (ch. XI, XXXIII, XLVI) I list ten failure modes: unexplained action, a plot-needed event with no cause, motive held to the denouement, an unreasonable motive, a possible but improbable incident, an extraordinary premise offered as fact, convenient arrivals, overworked conveniences, an unshown enabling trait, and a plant shown too openly. Each is a Sargent claim or a Sargent example, labelled as such. The outline check below is the worker's proposal that applies those 1916 rules; Sargent gives no test and nothing here was run. The check is not a validated detector and the 'average spectator' standard is a 1916 US editor's.

Curator qualifications: Failure-mode list traces to verified excerpts. The seven-question outline check is the worker proposal, correctly labelled, and was not run. Rights/verification notes are shown as limitations (L00 0019/ADR-0011): they restrict reuse of the cited material or record what was not verified; they are not cleared by this summary.

Limitations: [component_reuse_restriction] Internet Archive OCR text; licence of the scan not re-read here (public-domain 1916 text per prior S10 review).

Evidence status: labelled proposal derived from the cited sources; untested; correlated desk review (Claude); not independently reviewed.

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Evidence claims:
- [proposal] From Sargent's ch. X, XII and the passages they point to (ch. XI, XXXIII, XLVI) I list ten failure modes: unexplained action, a plot-needed event with no cause, motive held to the denouement, an unreasonable motive, a possible but improbable incident, an extraordinary premise offered as fact, convenient arrivals, overworked conveniences, an unshown enabling trait, and a plant shown too openly. Each is a Sargent claim or a Sargent example, labelled as such. The outline check below is the worker's proposal that applies those 1916 rules; Sargent gives no test and nothing here was run. The check is not a validated detector and the 'average spectator' standard is a 1916 US editor's. · locator: excerpt offsets reused from -01..-03 · source: https://archive.org/stream/techniqueofphoto00sarg/techniqueofphoto00sarg_djvu.txt

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