# How do I stop a theme from turning into a sermon, in particular when characters state the theme in dialogue?

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Baker identifies the thesis or problem play's characteristic fault as dialogue in which "the author himself is speaking", gives a worked example (Senator Morse speech) and a repair rule (rewrite until the speaker would say it). Archer says Brieux's theme-first plays suffer from "obtrusive predominance" of the abstract element and recommends openly declaring a moral apologue. Chekhov argues the writer should not judge, and that a sermon plus art is hard because maintaining the characters' tone is needed. Together: three fixes: voice the idea in the speaker's character, declare the fable, or withhold the verdict. These are literary-historical sources; no test of audience effect exists.

Baker identifies the thesis or problem play's characteristic fault as dialogue in which "the author himself is speaking", gives a worked example (Senator Morse speech) and a repair rule (rewrite until the speaker would say it). Archer says Brieux's theme-first plays suffer from "obtrusive predominance" of the abstract element and recommends openly declaring a moral apologue. Chekhov argues the writer should not judge, and that a sermon plus art is hard because maintaining the characters' tone is needed. Together: three fixes: voice the idea in the speaker's character, declare the fable, or withhold the verdict. These are literary-historical sources; no test of audience effect exists.

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- [inference] Baker identifies the thesis or problem play's characteristic fault as dialogue in which "the author himself is speaking", gives a worked example (Senator Morse speech) and a repair rule (rewrite until the speaker would say it). Archer says Brieux's theme-first plays suffer from "obtrusive predominance" of the abstract element and recommends openly declaring a moral apologue. Chekhov argues the writer should not judge, and that a sermon plus art is hard because maintaining the characters' tone is needed. Together: three fixes: voice the idea in the speaker's character, declare the fable, or withhold the verdict. These are literary-historical sources; no test of audience effect exists. · locator: see curator disposition · source: https://www.gutenberg.org/cache/epub/36580/pg36580.txt

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