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PROPOSAL: before reviewing a story for a venue, how can an agent keep a period account's content limits separate from its claims, predictions, examples and advice, using Sargent's 1916 tests as the stated basis, and test whether that separation helps?

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Two labelled parts. 1916 PRACTICE: nine checks that Sargent's chapter itself supports (purpose of the crime, passion or cold blood, shown or suggested, vice settings, a real moral, director overreach, leader wording, blanket local cuts, which gate a "will not pass" means), each tied to a quoted sentence and its claim class. PROPOSAL (not Sargent's, not executed): an agent tags each period content-limit sentence by claim class and gate, treats only the target venue's written rules as rules, and uses the 1916 checks as period craft prompts. A test is proposed for L10 with original synthetic fixtures. No legal conclusion; the 1916 content is preserved, not endorsed.

Two labelled parts. 1916 PRACTICE: nine checks that Sargent's chapter itself supports (purpose of the crime, passion or cold blood, shown or suggested, vice settings, a real moral, director overreach, leader wording, blanket local cuts, which gate a "will not pass" means), each tied to a quoted sentence and its claim class. PROPOSAL (not Sargent's, not executed): an agent tags each period content-limit sentence by claim class and gate, treats only the target venue's written rules as rules, and uses the 1916 checks as period craft prompts. A test is proposed for L10 with original synthetic fixtures. No legal conclusion; the 1916 content is preserved, not endorsed. Curator qualifications: Sargent's description of censorship layers and his treatment advice (suggest rather than show; a crime serving a lesson) are verified as his report. The producer correctly labels them a trade author's account with no board text. Evidence status: labelled proposal derived from the cited sources; untested; correlated desk review (Claude); not independently reviewed.
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  "citations": [
    {
      "url": "https://archive.org/stream/techniqueofphoto00sarg/techniqueofphoto00sarg_djvu.txt",
      "note": "sar.flat (a3cff7eb) ch. LXVII offsets per candidate"
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  • [proposal] Two labelled parts. 1916 PRACTICE: nine checks that Sargent's chapter itself supports (purpose of the crime, passion or cold blood, shown or suggested, vice settings, a real moral, director overreach, leader wording, blanket local cuts, which gate a "will not pass" means), each tied to a quoted sentence and its claim class. PROPOSAL (not Sargent's, not executed): an agent tags each period content-limit sentence by claim class and gate, treats only the target venue's written rules as rules, and uses the 1916 checks as period craft prompts. A test is proposed for L10 with original synthetic fixtures. No legal conclusion; the 1916 content is preserved, not endorsed. · locator: sar.flat (a3cff7eb) ch. LXVII offsets per candidate source

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