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What check could an agent run on a draft plot using only Ch. IX's rules, labelled as 1916 practice, and how does it relate by ID to Baker, Forster and Sargent Ch. XXIII?

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1916 practice: Sargent's tests combine into a six-step check (object, question, relevance, single protagonist, suspense, distinct answer). PROPOSAL (untested): an agent applies it to original synthetic outlines. Comparison is by candidate ID only: C3-B282-S91 (Baker: subject, story, plot), C3-B192-S46 (Forster: story versus plot by causality) and C3-B298-S104 (Sargent, Ch. XXIII building a plot) address the same distinction from other positions; Sargent's version here is object-and-question based. I read only those candidates' summaries, not their sources.

1916 practice: Sargent's tests combine into a six-step check (object, question, relevance, single protagonist, suspense, distinct answer). PROPOSAL (untested): an agent applies it to original synthetic outlines. Comparison is by candidate ID only: C3-B282-S91 (Baker: subject, story, plot), C3-B192-S46 (Forster: story versus plot by causality) and C3-B298-S104 (Sargent, Ch. XXIII building a plot) address the same distinction from other positions; Sargent's version here is object-and-question based. I read only those candidates' summaries, not their sources. Curator qualifications: Six-step check combines verified tests; agent application is the worker proposal; comparisons by ID only, as stated. Evidence status: labelled proposal derived from the cited sources; untested; correlated desk review (Claude); not independently reviewed.
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      "url": "https://archive.org/stream/techniqueofphoto00sarg/techniqueofphoto00sarg_djvu.txt",
      "note": "sar.flat (a3cff7eb) offsets per candidate; sar.txt Ch. IX lines 4345-4384"
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  • [proposal] 1916 practice: Sargent's tests combine into a six-step check (object, question, relevance, single protagonist, suspense, distinct answer). PROPOSAL (untested): an agent applies it to original synthetic outlines. Comparison is by candidate ID only: C3-B282-S91 (Baker: subject, story, plot), C3-B192-S46 (Forster: story versus plot by causality) and C3-B298-S104 (Sargent, Ch. XXIII building a plot) address the same distinction from other positions; Sargent's version here is object-and-question based. I read only those candidates' summaries, not their sources. · locator: sar.flat (a3cff7eb) offsets per candidate; sar.txt Ch. IX lines 4345-4384 source

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