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What does Sargent (1916, Ch. XLV) mean by 'establishing' a character or a relationship, how should it be done, and when may I leave it to the viewer's inference?

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1916 practice (Sargent, ch. XLV paras 1-5, with Ch. XLIII para 17). Establishing means making the audience know who a person is and how persons are related before it matters, because an unidentified character costs attention. It is done through context, dress and attitude, not necessarily by an early scene at the person's workplace: a man in front of a handsome house after talk of a strike reads as the owner; an elderly lady kissing the hero reads as his mother; a wife, sister and sweetheart behave differently. A leader is used only when action cannot show the fact (a marriage for money, uncle and nephew); obvious relationships should not be explained. Named failure: a withheld identity (the unnamed detective at the climax) sacrifices plot to curiosity. Examples are invented.

1916 practice (Sargent, ch. XLV paras 1-5, with Ch. XLIII para 17). Establishing means making the audience know who a person is and how persons are related before it matters, because an unidentified character costs attention. It is done through context, dress and attitude, not necessarily by an early scene at the person's workplace: a man in front of a handsome house after talk of a strike reads as the owner; an elderly lady kissing the hero reads as his mother; a wife, sister and sweetheart behave differently. A leader is used only when action cannot show the fact (a marriage for money, uncle and nephew); obvious relationships should not be explained. Named failure: a withheld identity (the unnamed detective at the climax) sacrifices plot to curiosity. Examples are invented. Curator qualifications: Plot-of-action, premise vs plot, suspense-bearing factors, continuity (time, place and fact leaders) and establishing rules are verified as Sargent's text. In -08, steps 9-10 are correctly labelled worker proposals. Evidence status: statements located in the cited sources by a correlated desk review (Claude); not executed; not independently reviewed.
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  • [sourced_fact] 1916 practice (Sargent, ch. XLV paras 1-5, with Ch. XLIII para 17). Establishing means making the audience know who a person is and how persons are related before it matters, because an unidentified character costs attention. It is done through context, dress and attitude, not necessarily by an early scene at the person's workplace: a man in front of a handsome house after talk of a strike reads as the owner; an elderly lady kissing the hero reads as his mother; a wife, sister and sweetheart behave differently. A leader is used only when action cannot show the fact (a marriage for money, uncle and nephew); obvious relationships should not be explained. Named failure: a withheld identity (the unnamed detective at the climax) sacrifices plot to curiosity. Examples are invented. · locator: sar.flat (a3cff7eb) ch. XLIII-XLV offsets per candidate source

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