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AGENT CHECK (1916 practice and a proposal): what checklist can an agent run on a draft adaptation using only what Sargent names in Ch. XLIX, and how would it be tested?

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LABEL: the steps are 1916 practice from Sargent plus a proposal by this worker; they are not Sargent's checklist and have not been tested. Eight checks: character dossier; main-plot/side-material split; narrative-plot dissection; event-order table with vision flags; explanation-to-action proportion; change ledger with cascade check; completeness of plot where the source gives suggestion only; leader budget. Sargent gives no measure for any of them; the tests below are proposals.

LABEL: the steps are 1916 practice from Sargent plus a proposal by this worker; they are not Sargent's checklist and have not been tested. Eight checks: character dossier; main-plot/side-material split; narrative-plot dissection; event-order table with vision flags; explanation-to-action proportion; change ledger with cascade check; completeness of plot where the source gives suggestion only; leader budget. Sargent gives no measure for any of them; the tests below are proposals. Curator qualifications: Adaptation order, source-type rules, event ordering, the bounded negatives on dialogue and inner thought, and reconstruction are verified as Sargent's text. The claim/example/market split in -07 holds. Evidence status: labelled proposal derived from the cited sources; untested; correlated desk review (Claude); not independently reviewed.
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  "citations": [
    {
      "url": "https://archive.org/stream/techniqueofphoto00sarg/techniqueofphoto00sarg_djvu.txt",
      "note": "sar.flat (a3cff7eb) ch. XLIX offsets per candidate"
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  • [proposal] LABEL: the steps are 1916 practice from Sargent plus a proposal by this worker; they are not Sargent's checklist and have not been tested. Eight checks: character dossier; main-plot/side-material split; narrative-plot dissection; event-order table with vision flags; explanation-to-action proportion; change ledger with cascade check; completeness of plot where the source gives suggestion only; leader budget. Sargent gives no measure for any of them; the tests below are proposals. · locator: sar.flat (a3cff7eb) ch. XLIX offsets per candidate source

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