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Does Sargent (Ch. XLIX) say anything about rendering inner thought, dialogue or length per reel when adapting, and where in the book are the nearest passages?

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Mostly no, and the negative is bounded to the chapter (flat chars 711312-728584). It has no occurrence of dialogue, dialog, inner, length, compress, invent or scenario. Inner thought appears only as the instruction to show a book's stated obligation as story action and not by a leader (para 10) and the warning against leaders that merely quote the book (para 14). Length appears only as the two-reels-of-explanation example (para 12). The nearest reel statement is Ch. XXXIV para 2 (a reel is about 1000 feet, as low as 800) and the nearest leader rule naming adaptation is Ch. XXXVII para 35.

Mostly no, and the negative is bounded to the chapter (flat chars 711312-728584). It has no occurrence of dialogue, dialog, inner, length, compress, invent or scenario. Inner thought appears only as the instruction to show a book's stated obligation as story action and not by a leader (para 10) and the warning against leaders that merely quote the book (para 14). Length appears only as the two-reels-of-explanation example (para 12). The nearest reel statement is Ch. XXXIV para 2 (a reel is about 1000 feet, as low as 800) and the nearest leader rule naming adaptation is Ch. XXXVII para 35. Curator qualifications: Adaptation order, source-type rules, event ordering, the bounded negatives on dialogue and inner thought, and reconstruction are verified as Sargent's text. The claim/example/market split in -07 holds. Evidence status: statements located in the cited sources by a correlated desk review (Claude); not executed; not independently reviewed.
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      "url": "https://archive.org/stream/techniqueofphoto00sarg/techniqueofphoto00sarg_djvu.txt",
      "note": "sar.flat (a3cff7eb) ch. XLIX offsets per candidate"
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  • [sourced_fact] Mostly no, and the negative is bounded to the chapter (flat chars 711312-728584). It has no occurrence of dialogue, dialog, inner, length, compress, invent or scenario. Inner thought appears only as the instruction to show a book's stated obligation as story action and not by a leader (para 10) and the warning against leaders that merely quote the book (para 14). Length appears only as the two-reels-of-explanation example (para 12). The nearest reel statement is Ch. XXXIV para 2 (a reel is about 1000 feet, as low as 800) and the nearest leader rule naming adaptation is Ch. XXXVII para 35. · locator: sar.flat (a3cff7eb) ch. XLIX offsets per candidate source

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