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What step-by-step method does Sargent (1916, Ch. XXIII) give for building a plot from a starting pair of characters or from a climax: what does he decide first, how does he add complications, and what does he check?

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1916 US practice, two worked methods in Ch. XXIII. Start-first (paras 5-7): choose two people, then ask what happens, who they are and why; pick the answer that makes the better story and fits the character; add a figure with a history that creates a complication inside the main theme (the physician who was the husband's rival, hence jealousy); pass the events in mental review, discard and adopt until the story is whole. Climax-first (paras 8-11): invent a big scene, then derive what must be true for it to work (the man innocent, perjured evidence, fresh evidence too late, the telephone unusable, the girl present in disguise as an electrician's helper); the end result is a start, a finish and a middle action, with freedom to go back to the point of deviation and to keep alternates for other plots. Checks are informal: better story, consistency with character, worthiness of the sacrifice, a combination not used before (13). Both methods are shown on one example each; Sargent reports ...

1916 US practice, two worked methods in Ch. XXIII. Start-first (paras 5-7): choose two people, then ask what happens, who they are and why; pick the answer that makes the better story and fits the character; add a figure with a history that creates a complication inside the main theme (the physician who was the husband's rival, hence jealousy); pass the events in mental review, discard and adopt until the story is whole. Climax-first (paras 8-11): invent a big scene, then derive what must be true for it to work (the man innocent, perjured evidence, fresh evidence too late, the telephone unusable, the girl present in disguise as an electrician's helper); the end result is a start, a finish and a middle action, with freedom to go back to the point of deviation and to keep alternates for other plots. Checks are informal: better story, consistency with character, worthiness of the sacrifice, a combination not used before (13). Both methods are shown on one example each; Sargent reports the first took under ten minutes. Curator qualifications: Plot-getting routes, the two worked methods, the four-revision Ben and Mary build and the named faults are verified as Sargent's text. The comparison row (-08) is synthesis by candidate ID, and the -09 build-and-check is a labelled proposal. Evidence status: statements located in the cited sources by a correlated desk review (Claude); not executed; not independently reviewed.
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  • [sourced_fact] 1916 US practice, two worked methods in Ch. XXIII. Start-first (paras 5-7): choose two people, then ask what happens, who they are and why; pick the answer that makes the better story and fits the character; add a figure with a history that creates a complication inside the main theme (the physician who was the husband's rival, hence jealousy); pass the events in mental review, discard and adopt until the story is whole. Climax-first (paras 8-11): invent a big scene, then derive what must be true for it to work (the man innocent, perjured evidence, fresh evidence too late, the telephone unusable, the girl present in disguise as an electrician's helper); the end result is a start, a finish and a middle action, with freedom to go back to the point of deviation and to keep alternates for other plots. Checks are informal: better story, consistency with character, worthiness of the sacrifice, a combination not used before (13). Both methods are shown on one example each; Sargent reports the first took under ten minutes. · locator: sar.flat (a3cff7eb) offsets per candidate source

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