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What are the ten test questions Sargent (1916, Ch. LXIII) gives for reviewing a finished script, what does each ask for, and what does passing or failing mean?

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1916 practice (Ch. LXIII para 11). Sargent reproduces a ten-question test, which he says was earlier offered in the Moving Picture World: new or novel; practicable; will it pass the censorships; struggle; suspense; motivation; characters well chosen; settings correct; plot adhered to; climax correct. Each is followed by a one- or two-sentence rule. His verdict rule: a story that passes 'should sell' (not always), one that does not stand the test has little chance. The ten questions mix market tests (cost, censorship, novelty), plot-craft tests (struggle, suspense, motive, adherence), and fit-and-values tests (characters, settings, righteous ending). Grouping and the 'needs outside knowledge' split are synthesis. Earlier Sargent candidates cover the craft behind Q2 and Q4-Q7 (see related).

1916 practice (Ch. LXIII para 11). Sargent reproduces a ten-question test, which he says was earlier offered in the Moving Picture World: new or novel; practicable; will it pass the censorships; struggle; suspense; motivation; characters well chosen; settings correct; plot adhered to; climax correct. Each is followed by a one- or two-sentence rule. His verdict rule: a story that passes 'should sell' (not always), one that does not stand the test has little chance. The ten questions mix market tests (cost, censorship, novelty), plot-craft tests (struggle, suspense, motive, adherence), and fit-and-values tests (characters, settings, righteous ending). Grouping and the 'needs outside knowledge' split are synthesis. Earlier Sargent candidates cover the craft behind Q2 and Q4-Q7 (see related). Curator qualifications: Self-criticism rules, the twelve stock rejection glosses and the ten-question test are verified as Sargent's text; his own run on Example A is reported as his reading. The 'no audience trial' scope claim holds: 'spectator' appears only as an interest criterion. Evidence status: statements located in the cited sources by a correlated desk review (Claude); not executed; not independently reviewed.
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  • [sourced_fact] 1916 practice (Ch. LXIII para 11). Sargent reproduces a ten-question test, which he says was earlier offered in the Moving Picture World: new or novel; practicable; will it pass the censorships; struggle; suspense; motivation; characters well chosen; settings correct; plot adhered to; climax correct. Each is followed by a one- or two-sentence rule. His verdict rule: a story that passes 'should sell' (not always), one that does not stand the test has little chance. The ten questions mix market tests (cost, censorship, novelty), plot-craft tests (struggle, suspense, motive, adherence), and fit-and-values tests (characters, settings, righteous ending). Grouping and the 'needs outside knowledge' split are synthesis. Earlier Sargent candidates cover the craft behind Q2 and Q4-Q7 (see related). · locator: sar.flat (a3cff7eb) ch. LXIII offsets per candidate source

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