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Part by part, where do Phillips (1914) and Esenwein and Leeds (1913, revised 1919; with the titles chapter) agree or differ, and what checklist would an agent follow to assemble a 1914-style submission package?

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Compared by candidate ID only (C3-B188-S42-01/-03 and C3-B286-S94-01, not re-read against the Esenwein text): the two manuals agree on the editor-first role of title and synopsis, the director-facing cast, a numbered scenario and a scene-plot part (Phillips's is setting-grouped; the relayed E&L rows do not describe theirs); they differ on Phillips's extra Author's Remarks part (50 words), on the scene-plot's status (regular part versus supplement), on the synopsis ceiling (Phillips: as few words as possible, 250 a convention, under 100 possible; Esenwein 1919: as many words as needed), on the descriptor (scenes by interior/exterior versus settings), and on the title (Phillips: three audiences, no list; Esenwein: five attributes). Neither relayed source gives a title length. A 12-step checklist built from the 1914 rules and specimen is offered below; it is a proposal labelled 1914 practice, not a standard. Excerpts drop Gutenberg italic underscores and collapse line wraps.

Compared by candidate ID only (C3-B188-S42-01/-03 and C3-B286-S94-01, not re-read against the Esenwein text): the two manuals agree on the editor-first role of title and synopsis, the director-facing cast, a numbered scenario and a scene-plot part (Phillips's is setting-grouped; the relayed E&L rows do not describe theirs); they differ on Phillips's extra Author's Remarks part (50 words), on the scene-plot's status (regular part versus supplement), on the synopsis ceiling (Phillips: as few words as possible, 250 a convention, under 100 possible; Esenwein 1919: as many words as needed), on the descriptor (scenes by interior/exterior versus settings), and on the title (Phillips: three audiences, no list; Esenwein: five attributes). Neither relayed source gives a title length. A 12-step checklist built from the 1914 rules and specimen is offered below; it is a proposal labelled 1914 practice, not a standard. Excerpts drop Gutenberg italic underscores and collapse line wraps. Curator qualifications: Comparison by ID plus a 12-step package checklist; PROPOSAL. Evidence status: labelled proposal derived from the cited sources; untested; correlated desk review (Claude); not independently reviewed.
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  • [proposal] Compared by candidate ID only (C3-B188-S42-01/-03 and C3-B286-S94-01, not re-read against the Esenwein text): the two manuals agree on the editor-first role of title and synopsis, the director-facing cast, a numbered scenario and a scene-plot part (Phillips's is setting-grouped; the relayed E&L rows do not describe theirs); they differ on Phillips's extra Author's Remarks part (50 words), on the scene-plot's status (regular part versus supplement), on the synopsis ceiling (Phillips: as few words as possible, 250 a convention, under 100 possible; Esenwein 1919: as many words as needed), on the descriptor (scenes by interior/exterior versus settings), and on the title (Phillips: three audiences, no list; Esenwein: five attributes). Neither relayed source gives a title length. A 12-step checklist built from the 1914 rules and specimen is offered below; it is a proposal labelled 1914 practice, not a standard. Excerpts drop Gutenberg italic underscores and collapse line wraps. · locator: candidate evidence excerpts source

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