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[Proposal] What check could an agent run on a two-strand outline of a long story to judge whether the strands are joined and prepared, using only what Lubbock's chapters XIV-XVI (1921 criticism) state?

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[Proposal built on 1921 criticism; not a tested method] Six questions an agent could put to a two-strand outline, each tied to one statement in Lubbock's XIV-XVI: what kind of join (contrast, clash or none); whether the strands have unequal timing needs; whether the first crisis of each strand is prepared; whether long gaps are carried by an earlier picture; what the climax still has to establish; and whether the picture and the extravagant action sit at the same angle to fact. The single-subject test for War and Peace is not repeated (see C3-B275-S86-06). Lubbock gives no test, evaluates no outlines, and says nothing about machines; the check and its outputs are this batch's proposal, to be tried on original synthetic outlines.

[Proposal built on 1921 criticism; not a tested method] Six questions an agent could put to a two-strand outline, each tied to one statement in Lubbock's XIV-XVI: what kind of join (contrast, clash or none); whether the strands have unequal timing needs; whether the first crisis of each strand is prepared; whether long gaps are carried by an earlier picture; what the climax still has to establish; and whether the picture and the extravagant action sit at the same angle to fact. The single-subject test for War and Peace is not repeated (see C3-B275-S86-06). Lubbock gives no test, evaluates no outlines, and says nothing about machines; the check and its outputs are this batch's proposal, to be tried on original synthetic outlines. Curator qualifications: Six-question strand-join review; PROPOSAL; experiment not run. Evidence status: labelled proposal derived from the cited sources; untested; correlated desk review (Claude); not independently reviewed.
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  • [proposal] [Proposal built on 1921 criticism; not a tested method] Six questions an agent could put to a two-strand outline, each tied to one statement in Lubbock's XIV-XVI: what kind of join (contrast, clash or none); whether the strands have unequal timing needs; whether the first crisis of each strand is prepared; whether long gaps are carried by an earlier picture; what the climax still has to establish; and whether the picture and the extravagant action sit at the same angle to fact. The single-subject test for War and Peace is not repeated (see C3-B275-S86-06). Lubbock gives no test, evaluates no outlines, and says nothing about machines; the check and its outputs are this batch's proposal, to be tried on original synthetic outlines. · locator: candidate evidence excerpts source

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