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How do romance practitioners structure dual (hero and heroine) point of view, what do they warn about, and where do they disagree?

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Practitioner sources agree that alternating third-person-limited viewpoints of the two leads is the dominant convention, and that mixing viewpoints mid-passage ('head hopping') is the main error. Harlequin's 2025 editorial pieces give two layouts: alternating chapters, or alternating inside a chapter with a time break (most Harlequin books). Romance authors give reasons for dual POV (falling for both leads, dramatic irony) and for single POV (not knowing the other lead's thoughts keeps tension). No open scholarly study of romance dual POV was found in the bounded searches done. Curator qualifications: All excerpts located; dual third-limited POV dominant, head hopping the main error; single vs dual POV advocacy kept. Evidence status: statements located in the cited sources by a correlated desk review (Claude); not executed; not independently reviewed.

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[sourced_fact] Practitioner sources agree that alternating third-person-limited viewpoints of the two leads is the dominant convention, and that mixing viewpoints mid-passage ('head hopping') is the main error. Harlequin's 2025 editorial pieces give two layouts: alternating chapters, or alternating inside a chapter with a time break (most Harlequin books). Romance authors give reasons for dual POV (falling for both leads, dramatic irony) and for single POV (not knowing the other lead's thoughts keeps tension). No open scholarly study of romance dual POV was found in the bounded searches done. · locator: candidate evidence excerpts source

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