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How could an agent check an ensemble outline for orphaned characters, unbalanced lines and unmotivated convergence, and what in the sources supports each check?

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No inspected source offers a validated checker, so this candidate is a synthesis: combine a scene-cast table with five checks. (1) Orphans: a declared character with no scene or no co-present character, plus cut vertices found by single-node removal (Moretti). (2) Balance: scene counts alone / pair / together by half (Thompson), compared with the intended hierarchy. (3) Neglect gaps: longest run of scenes without a line (Bost et al.), with an intent note because gaps can be deliberate. (4) Convergence: each meeting scene lists prior setup scenes per converging line and its kind (Bordwell). (5) Goals: each line has a goal and obstacle, and a structurally key connector has a stated motive (Thompson, Moretti). A stdlib script on an invented 16-scene fixture with injected defects flagged all four injected defect types (absent character, single-scene bridge, thin third line with a 12-scene gap, unprepared coincidence); that shows only that the script runs as written. Thresholds (2.0 rati...

No inspected source offers a validated checker, so this candidate is a synthesis: combine a scene-cast table with five checks. (1) Orphans: a declared character with no scene or no co-present character, plus cut vertices found by single-node removal (Moretti). (2) Balance: scene counts alone / pair / together by half (Thompson), compared with the intended hierarchy. (3) Neglect gaps: longest run of scenes without a line (Bost et al.), with an intent note because gaps can be deliberate. (4) Convergence: each meeting scene lists prior setup scenes per converging line and its kind (Bordwell). (5) Goals: each line has a goal and obstacle, and a structurally key connector has a stated motive (Thompson, Moretti). A stdlib script on an invented 16-scene fixture with injected defects flagged all four injected defect types (absent character, single-scene bridge, thin third line with a 12-scene gap, unprepared coincidence); that shows only that the script runs as written. Thresholds (2.0 ratio, 8-scene gap) are the worker's and unvalidated. Curator qualifications: The ensemble-outline checker is a labelled synthesis (five checks) with no validated thresholds. Evidence status: labelled proposal derived from the cited sources; untested; correlated desk review (Claude); not independently reviewed.
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  "citations": [
    {
      "url": "https://litlab.stanford.edu/LiteraryLabPamphlet2.pdf",
      "note": "node removal"
    },
    {
      "url": "https://www.davidbordwell.net/blog/2019/03/31/balancing-three-protagonists-in-the-favourite/",
      "note": "node removal"
    },
    {
      "url": "https://www.davidbordwell.net/blog/2010/10/11/seduced-by-structure/",
      "note": "node removal"
    },
    {
      "url": "https://www.davidbordwell.net/blog/2006/11/27/lessons-from-babel/",
      "note": "node removal"
    },
    {
      "url": "https://arxiv.org/html/1602.07811v3",
      "note": "node removal"
    },
    {
      "url": "https://arxiv.org/html/1907.02704v2",
      "note": "node removal"
    },
    {
      "url": "https://www.davidbordwell.net/blog/2019/09/11/telling-the-big-story-network-narratives-at-venice-2019/",
      "note": "node removal"
    }
  ]
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Evidence claims

  • [proposal] No inspected source offers a validated checker, so this candidate is a synthesis: combine a scene-cast table with five checks. (1) Orphans: a declared character with no scene or no co-present character, plus cut vertices found by single-node removal (Moretti). (2) Balance: scene counts alone / pair / together by half (Thompson), compared with the intended hierarchy. (3) Neglect gaps: longest run of scenes without a line (Bost et al.), with an intent note because gaps can be deliberate. (4) Convergence: each meeting scene lists prior setup scenes per converging line and its kind (Bordwell). (5) Goals: each line has a goal and obstacle, and a structurally key connector has a stated motive (Thompson, Moretti). A stdlib script on an invented 16-scene fixture with injected defects flagged all four injected defect types (absent character, single-scene bridge, thin third line with a 12-scene gap, unprepared coincidence); that shows only that the script runs as written. Thresholds (2.0 ratio, 8-scene gap) are the worker's and unvalidated. · locator: node removal source

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