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How early and how openly must a motive or enabling fact be planted before the act that needs it, and how does Sargent treat coincidence and convenient arrivals?

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Sargent's rule in ch. X (para 7) is that the motive be given clearly in action as the story goes on, not held back for the denouement. The fuller rule is in ch. XLVI 'Preparation for the Event' (outside the assigned chapters): give the explanation in advance, casually, in footage where there is time, because an event with no preparation 'cannot be understood or accepted' yet a plant shown too openly kills suspense. For coincidence, ch. X to XII never use the word (0 of 7 whole-text hits lie in flat chars 96409-118827); Sargent's rule sits in ch. XXXIII paras 21-23: characters cannot just 'happen to be' where the author needs them, so give each arrival its own purpose, and avoid shortcuts such as the death-bed confession. He gives no definition of coincidence, no count and no placement rule. His rules are claims; the Andrew, Frank, John and Henry stories are examples.

Sargent's rule in ch. X (para 7) is that the motive be given clearly in action as the story goes on, not held back for the denouement. The fuller rule is in ch. XLVI 'Preparation for the Event' (outside the assigned chapters): give the explanation in advance, casually, in footage where there is time, because an event with no preparation 'cannot be understood or accepted' yet a plant shown too openly kills suspense. For coincidence, ch. X to XII never use the word (0 of 7 whole-text hits lie in flat chars 96409-118827); Sargent's rule sits in ch. XXXIII paras 21-23: characters cannot just 'happen to be' where the author needs them, so give each arrival its own purpose, and avoid shortcuts such as the death-bed confession. He gives no definition of coincidence, no count and no placement rule. His rules are claims; the Andrew, Frank, John and Henry stories are examples. Curator qualifications: Plant-and-coincidence rules verified. Correction: E15 and the scope finding put flat char 685820 ('the arm of coincidence is sprained once more') in ch. XXIV 'Building Up the Plot' para 2. It is in ch. XLVIII 'Writing a Play', in the worked construction of 'The Narrow Paths of Fate'. The claim's substance is unchanged. Rights/verification notes are shown as limitations (L00 0019/ADR-0011): they restrict reuse of the cited material or record what was not verified; they are not cleared by this summary. Limitations: [component_reuse_restriction] Internet Archive OCR text; licence of the scan not re-read here (public-domain 1916 text per prior S10 review). Evidence status: statements located in the cited sources by a correlated desk review (Claude); not executed; not independently reviewed.
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  • [sourced_fact] Sargent's rule in ch. X (para 7) is that the motive be given clearly in action as the story goes on, not held back for the denouement. The fuller rule is in ch. XLVI 'Preparation for the Event' (outside the assigned chapters): give the explanation in advance, casually, in footage where there is time, because an event with no preparation 'cannot be understood or accepted' yet a plant shown too openly kills suspense. For coincidence, ch. X to XII never use the word (0 of 7 whole-text hits lie in flat chars 96409-118827); Sargent's rule sits in ch. XXXIII paras 21-23: characters cannot just 'happen to be' where the author needs them, so give each arrival its own purpose, and avoid shortcuts such as the death-bed confession. He gives no definition of coincidence, no count and no placement rule. His rules are claims; the Andrew, Frank, John and Henry stories are examples. · locator: sar.flat chars 101186-101316, 422820-425471, 666064-671019; sar.flat chars 684201 (CHAPTER XLVIII WRITING A PLAY heading) and 685809-685853 source

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