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Given a scene description, what check can an agent run so every line shows something that can be seen (1914 practice), and what in that check is only the lead's proposal, including any use for text-to-video prompts?

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Agent check assembled from Phillips (1914 practice, each step tagged with its source) plus lead-proposed steps (tagged PROPOSAL). Steps: strike 'registers <emotion>' lines; replace each with a restrained visible sign; add a short beat only where the feeling needs room; use caption/close-view/vision-scene for dreams (period devices); write sounds only when they bear on the action, as source plus reaction; give each line an action verb and only visible objects (outside Chapter V); finish with a reader test (editor/director/actor in 1914; a second reader or agent listing what they would see in the PROPOSAL). Use for text-to-video prompt writing is a hypothesis only; no source inspected documents it, and Phillips does not address AI.

Agent check assembled from Phillips (1914 practice, each step tagged with its source) plus lead-proposed steps (tagged PROPOSAL). Steps: strike 'registers <emotion>' lines; replace each with a restrained visible sign; add a short beat only where the feeling needs room; use caption/close-view/vision-scene for dreams (period devices); write sounds only when they bear on the action, as source plus reaction; give each line an action verb and only visible objects (outside Chapter V); finish with a reader test (editor/director/actor in 1914; a second reader or agent listing what they would see in the PROPOSAL). Use for text-to-video prompt writing is a hypothesis only; no source inspected documents it, and Phillips does not address AI. Curator qualifications: Seven-step audit tagged 1914 vs PROPOSAL; text-to-video prompt use is a hypothesis; L10 experiment not run. Evidence status: curator/producer inference or synthesis from the cited sources (code read, not executed, where code is cited); correlated desk review (Claude); not independently reviewed.
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  • [inference] Agent check assembled from Phillips (1914 practice, each step tagged with its source) plus lead-proposed steps (tagged PROPOSAL). Steps: strike 'registers <emotion>' lines; replace each with a restrained visible sign; add a short beat only where the feeling needs room; use caption/close-view/vision-scene for dreams (period devices); write sounds only when they bear on the action, as source plus reaction; give each line an action verb and only visible objects (outside Chapter V); finish with a reader test (editor/director/actor in 1914; a second reader or agent listing what they would see in the PROPOSAL). Use for text-to-video prompt writing is a hypothesis only; no source inspected documents it, and Phillips does not address AI. · locator: candidate evidence excerpts source

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